Est. Budget: $40.00
I need a review and feedback on a novella. It is at its first stage, I know it needs major improvements, hence want some feedback before I make the changes I think it seriosuly needs:
I need advice AND suggestions how to improve:
1. General Storyline
2. Make it easier to read.
3. Conflict and suspense
4. Romance Storyline
Before I select someone, you can all do a sample chapter (most likely the first chapter). For this suggest to me ...